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How to write successful conclusions that take the essay structure into account
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the conclusion in the final paragraph in an essay
it must clearly link to the INTRODUCTION (your thesis)
Look at these examples to see how the student's conclusion matches the thesis from the introduction. If you don't do this, you will lose marks for the lack of cohesiveness and clarity throughout your essay.
the introduction - example 1As competition in the workplace increases, with larger numbers of people chasing fewer jobs, applicants are being assessed not only for their general intelligence, but also their social and emotional intelligence. Social intelligence can be defined as that area of intelligence that deals with social skills, and is necessary for medical professionals to work effectively with other people. Emotional intelligence is the individual's ability to deal with their own and other people's emotions - for example, being able to show and recognize empathy. This may also include intrapersonal intelligence, which concerns self-understanding and self-awareness. These types of intelligence are now considered very important for people working in a medical environment. This essay discusses the two types of intelligence, evaluates their relative importance, and examines the relevance of each in the field of medicine.
the conclusion- example 1 The discussion has shown that social and emotional, including intrapersonal, intelligence have a crucial part to play in the medical environment. We have considered the role of research on both sides, but it has not been possible to cover all of the latest research. What is clear, however, is that the three types of intelligence can improve job-seekers' chances in the job market. Training in these types of intelligence should be offered not just on medical courses, but even as early as secondary school with greater allocation of educational investment.
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the introduction - example 2Artificial intelligence, or AI as it is commonly referred to, is now a popular theme in movies and popular culture. But is it limited to science fiction and human imagination? It appears not. Robots are in our desktop printers, our cars, and even our refrigerators, helping us live our daily lives and in some cases making our decisions for us. Humankind is genuinely excited by the prospect of automation both in industry and in the domestic sphere. Many question this development, but the question of whether this technological advance is positive is not the focus here. In this essay, artificial intelligence will be investigated from a historical perspective, showing how it began with simple machines and within fifty years has progressed to become a cutting edge technology revolutionising work and home, even though so much more can be achieved.
the conclusion - example 2As has been shown, artificial intelligence has developed rapidly over the last five decades. As with any brief outline, it has only been possible to give the main developments in artificial intelligence with a brief reference to early machines and automata and humankind's desire to create independent machines. It is clear from the research that the speed of development has been increasing in recent years. Although much has been achieved in the field, artificial intelligence is still in its infancy. While artificial intelligence is an exciting area, more research needs to be carried out into its impact on society in general
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Now consider the structure and the language of the conclusions
Both of them contain:-
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Common language to use in conclusions are:-
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